1.3 short film

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Actual:
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Shot Lists:

Props:

Risk Assessment:

Legal and Ethical:

Photo story board:

Risks and Hazards:

Script:

Shot logs:

Rough edit:

Rough edit review (My Opinion):
Overall the short video makes some sense however there are a few mistakes that need to be fixed for example,  when Barren looks through the window of the door, we see Simon (the teacher) laughing and try's to cover it up but we also see no one at the wall where Archie and Yakub are for the shot. After that shot the tri pod is not very still which is making the video more shaky. Another problem is when Barren says one of his lines as a close up but he goes off the shot. As Barren, Archie and Yakub go outside, it is dark however it all of the sudden changes to day light. The final problem I've noticed is that we didn't do a close up of Simon grabbing the sandwich

Rough edit review (Simon Rac opinion):
I think the overall edit is quite good and smooth transitions make sense etc. However we need to reshoot most scenes in the room as They are shaky and some involve looking at the camera.
I also want to re shoot the over the shoulder of Barren as Yakub moved away from the angle i set and it didnt capture Yakubs speach properly as the focus was more on Archie rather than Yakub. Over all i would re shoot the carpark and how the actors got there as it looks like they teleported from one spot to the other.

Finished edit: